Response to First Draft

My draft, At first I thought it was going to be hard because it had to be a minimum of four pages but actually it was longer than I expected it to be, I started on it earlier than we were supposed to. So once everyone else began I was almost done because I had a head start , the topic I chose was personal so it was easy to write about without stopping although it was hard to a title because I didn’t wanna be repetitive with the same things I talked about previously so, as of now it doesn’t have a title. I’ll have to go back through to fix the punctuation I’m sure . At the time I was just typing to tell the story not worrying about anything else at that moment. Telling to story I told didn’t make me cry or anything while typing it but when I was brainstorming about it I was a little sad, when we were first assigned this assignment and Professor Harmon was telling his own story he started crying and that made me tear up a little bit at first but after that I was okay. I could’ve kept going with my story over five pages but the length was four pages minimum and five maximum so I didn’t wanna go over five although it was more things I would’ve talked about if I was able to.