I wrote this piece back in 2017 for my apparel class so I wrote about Coco Chanel as some history in fashion, the purpose was to enlighten people about who she was and how she became a designer.
The audience was intended for fashion designers or anyone interested in the fashion industry and wanted to know a little more about Coco Chanel.
As I wrote this piece I was probably asking myself why was Coco such an important person and how did she impact the fashion industry. While writing this piece I learned about how Coco Chanel was established and why I learned about the connects she had and also I learned how everything went downhill for her and how she made a name for herself.
Some strengths I noticed in this piece were the details I had and how everything connected it all just made sense and flowed together as one piece. Some weakness I noticed now looking back on it, I wrote it more as if it were a biography.
I don’t really have any other question left that I didn’t answer in the essay already.
After re-reading it I understand what the voice in writing actually means because since I have grown since I wrote that essay, I notice things are different compared to how I would write an essay now.
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